This poem made me cry,and i have put it up on the wall of my room,never to forget what prasoon ji has said.Thank you prasoon ji.

good one

hey really gud &
itz touches mah soul

This poem made me cry :(

sir, i am gr8 fan of urs nd dis is really amazing. i will really grateful if u reply my message , sir i too wrote a few lines after mumbai attacks........
for our brave soldiers

main jaag raha tha,

taki desh so sake,

main maun tha,

taki desh hans sake,

main goliyan kha raha tha,

taki desh chen se khana kha sake,

main hamesha ke liye so gaya,

taki desh jag sake,

pls do comment

Lyricist Prasoon Joshi wrote a poem to express his feelings of pain and anger over the Mumbai terror attacks.

Prasoon ji,

Words fail me - a heartfelt outpouring indeed.

Your hindi film lyrics too are a gust of ’bheegi mitti ki mahek’ - am currently addicted to ’Arziyan’!

Aap par sadaiv Ma Vageshwari ka aashirwad bana rahe.

Prasoon jee,

Bahut accha likha hai apne...you inspire me alot.. and I hope same effect would be on others...

song or poem, it is like your song.

..and it would be the great one if to translate to another languages?

Sir,
I expect you to update your blogs frequently. This poem is overwhelming. What a great emotional way to convey the message of resilience and not mere acceptance of the situation. And the line ”Is baar nahin banney doonga usey itna laachaar
Ki paan ki peek aur khoon ka fark hi khatm ho jaye” is manifestation of youe observation power connected with poetic skills. Brilliant!!! hope to see more poems.

So touching...
really a master piece

hi, may i translate this into my own language?

such a nice song, thanks for writing this.

very interesting post, thank you for sharing.

Dear Mr. Joshi.
Greetings.
I avail this opportunity to present my compliments and have the honor to bring the following for your kind consideration.
I am a retired UNICEF Staff-experienced in Information and Communication,Advertising,Fund-raising and Scribbling my thoughts and aspirations,what I call a Script- a Real true Story.
I am writing to seek your help and assistance in translating my thoughts and aspirations in a professional Screen Play ?
In case you have the Time and or the Inclination, we can meet any time after September 22,2009 at your time,date and venue.
I await your most considered response.
In the mean while,Mr.Joshi, please accept the assurances and expressions of my highest considerations.
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Mere Pahad Jaise Adarniya Aadarsh Guru Prashoon Ji.Deependra Negi(From-Tehri,Uttrakhand-Delhi-Dubai)
”Aapne Likha Hai apne Ander Chubhti Huwi Herdya Ki peeda ko”
aapne Darshaya hai har ek Bhartiya ki Savendnao Ko”
”yun To Aapne Kiya hai SankhNaad,Bhartiyata Jaganae Ko....
Swikar Kiya Hai Nyota Yuddh Ka Aaj
Bharat Sanwarne Ko.............Yuddh Zari Hai...........
Aapne Sirf Yahi Likha Hai...

Aap Mere Adarsh Ho....
Deependra negi”Deep Negi”-Ek Pahadi
Deepinegi@yahoo.com

Prasoon ji!

It was an overwhelming experience to read through the scintillating lines of thy homage! It was a moving account of the present scenario and makes me weak on knees to ponder upon the stark reality. Your words have laid bare how we after morning for a while get placid in our ramblings...forgetting the mercury reading of the blood that had once curdled. May sanity prevail!

Sir, I was reading your preface on ’Chandrakanta’-the novel and it was a vyage into the forgotten memory lanes. Sir,I too,along with many other readers wish that thee would update your blog regularly...looking forward to reading more from your illustrious inks!

-ek aur pahadi:)

yeah, please update regularly, this awesome poem though..

इस बार नहीं

इस बार जब वो छोटी सी बच्ची मेरे पास अपनी खरोंच ले कर आएगी
मैं उसे फू फू कर नहीं बहलाऊँगा
पनपने दूँगा उसकी टीस को
इस बार नहीं

इस बार जब मैं चेहरों पर दर्द लिखा देखूँगा
नहीं गाऊंगा गीत पीड़ा भुला देने वाले
दर्द को रिसने दूँगा ,उतरने दूँगा अन्दर गहरे
इस बार नहीं

इस बार मैं न मरहम लगाऊँगा
न ही उठाऊँगा रुई के फाहे
और न ही कहूँगा की तुम आँखें बंद करलो ,गर्दन उधर कर लो मैं दावा लगता हूँ
देखने दूँगा सबको हम सबको खुले नंगे घाव
इस बार नहीं

इस बार जब उलझने देखूँगा ,छटपटाहट देखूँगा
नहीं दौडूंगा उलझी ड़ोर लपेटने
उलझने दूँगा जब तक उलझ सके
इस बार नहीं

इस बार कर्म का हवाला दे कर नहीं उठाऊँगा औजार
नहीं करूंगा फिर से एक नयी शुरुआत
नहीं बनूँगा मिसाल एक कर्मयोगी की
नहीं आने दूँगा ज़िन्दगी को आसानी से पटरी पर
उतारने दूँगा उसे कीचड मैं ,टेढे मेढे रास्तों पे
नहीं सूखने दूँगा दीवारों पर लगा खून
हल्का नहीं पड़ने दूँगा उसका रंग
इस बार नहीं बनने दूँगा उसे इतना लाचार
कि पान की पीक और खून का फर्क ही ख़त्म हो जाए
इस बार नहीं

इस बार घावों को देखना है
गौर से
थोड़ा लंबे वक्त तक
कुछ फैसले
और उसके बाद हौसले
कहीं तोह शुरुआत करनी ही होगी
इस बार यही तय किया है

... प्रसून जोशी

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hello, this is my first time i visit here. I found so many interesting in your blog especially on how to determine the topic. keep up the good work.

This poem made me cry,and i have put it up on the wall of my room,never to forget what prasoon ji has said.Thank you prasoon ji.

This is a truly touching story. moved my heart...

This poem reflects the sentiments of not only of Indians but all the saner elements and peace loving citizens in the world.

Very touching. Breaking my heart :_

Prasoon Jee,

We really like your lyrics, we were wondering if you happen to know Nepali?:)!!

Thanks,
P.Pant

This is a truly touching story. moved my heart...